Vibgyor-Colourless Poem by Mubeen Sadhika

Vibgyor-Colourless

Rating: 5.0


V

Weary violaceous
achromatic lilac
bleached mauve

I

Insipid Beryl
lifeless cobalt
vapid sapphire

B

Blurred azure
dull aquamarine
blanched cyan

G

Pale emerald
lifeless leaf
faded olive

Y

Murky sun
tame chicken
lackluster canary

O

Dim flame
stained copper
sick carrot

R

Anemic blood
tarnished scarlet
prosaic ruby

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Surya . 23 August 2009

sure it all depend on how we look at it. let us be optimistic. loved your poem voted10 surya

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Brenda Arroyo 19 October 2009

Great usage of words.

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Prince Obed de la Cruz 29 August 2009

an another 'poetic acronym'

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Ted M 24 August 2009

A nice demo of your creativity. Good job.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 23 August 2009

any coil has two sides to compare.. u should know the sad part of it too....10 read mine colour....anniversary and furious nature....

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Sarwar Chowdhury 23 August 2009

crafted beautifully no doubt but colourlessnessssssss made me feel saddddddd! 1010101010+ for the meaningful wording!

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