Tiny Rhyme Poem by Mubeen Sadhika

Tiny Rhyme

Rating: 4.1


Fish oh! fish
swish a miss
wish on hiss
shush to hush

Push push
oh! fish
flush a blush
fresh 'n' mush

Fish oh! fish
slush the gush
slash in gash
splash the plush

Fish oh! fish
pose to posh
rush a mash
fish oh! gosh!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Eyan Desir 19 October 2009

this poem was a little funny good write

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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 28 October 2009

Excellent rhymes. You’ve done it. Rhymes are scaring please write more and more. Ten+++ Ms. Nivedita UK Cordially invite to read and comment on Lingerie-IG* Enigmatic Navel or other poems

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Noel Horlanda 29 September 2009

This piece contains strong rhymes, nice to read especially to kids. Besides the lines are melodious, there are simple musical notes in it. Well done...cheers 10+

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Villager Gulabo 29 September 2009

a real gud poem....specially the rhyme wala part....

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Opeyemi Borisade 29 September 2009

Mubeen, I read with my mind & it's now really twisted. Graet rhyming...good work! Cheers

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Akhtar Jawad 17 July 2018

A well rhymed beautiful poem, loved it.

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Chinedu Dike 16 January 2017

Beautiful and sonorous train of thought, well articulated and nicely brought forth in good rhyme scheme with conviction. Thanks for sharing.

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Mubeen Sadhika 11 November 2016

Thank you all for giving your valuable comments.

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Robin D'Souza 08 April 2011

I love it! It's so nonsensical...kind of like Dr. Seuss. I love Dr. Seuss.: D

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Yaseen Anwer 07 December 2010

Excellently penned. Good Luck ahead! Cheers! Yaseen Anwer

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