Bri Edwards

Gold Star - 9,642 Points (some time ago / Earth, i believe)

Umpiring A Competition...... [poem By Request; Kinda Short; Poem Competition Umpires] - Poem by Bri Edwards

Elyas does progress through competition so well.
Gratitude, for the four umpires, in him does swell.
Doctors Nejati and Rang Avar are the names of two.
And two other nice humans with a good world view.
Elyas was impressed with their humanity concern.
From each other I'm sure they all can more learn.

Dr. Nejati kindly posed some questions to answer.
I bet Elyas handled them like a comfortable dancer.
It would be nice if all contestants could be 'the winner'.
But not winning is not as bad as being a sinner.

I send good luck wishes to my friend Elyas in Iran,
And to the Umpires for doing.....whatever they can.

(September 13,2013)


Poet's Notes about The Poem

my poemhunter friend ellias anderson aka captain A suggested a thank you poem would be nice to send to one of the umpires of his competition in iran.

Comments about Umpiring A Competition...... [poem By Request; Kinda Short; Poem Competition Umpires] by Bri Edwards

  • Rookie - 287 Points marvin brato (9/24/2013 11:07:00 PM)

    Succinct piece of poetry, well-penned! (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 17 Points Alookh (matin) (9/19/2013 9:10:00 AM)

    good poem for the umpires! ! ....so melodious and perfect rhymes!
    pointing to an important subject that sometimes we forget :
    It would be nice if all contestants could be 'the winner'.
    But not winning is not as bad as being a sinner.

    i wish his success in this competition as his happines causes mine! ! ....waiting for good news from u Elli! ! ! !

    and thanx to Bri! ! ! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 264 Points Ellias Anderson Jr. (9/18/2013 2:03:00 PM)

    Hmmm..... i should read it for thousands of times.... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 264 Points Ellias Anderson Jr. (9/15/2013 3:10:00 AM)

    i owe to you bri for this art
    God helps the humanity and the people who supports it. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, September 13, 2013

Poem Edited: Monday, September 16, 2013


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