Unanswered Whys In My Mind Poem by shirin sheikhi

Unanswered Whys In My Mind

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Feeling like being carried away in wind
Grasping a dandelion clock instead of wing

Looking down at the people when drift
Drowning in their own lives dreams

Following the ambitions, mere greed's
Condoning all the partial prejudice

Missing needs for consolation treats
Disregarding facts to be discreet

Frittering time to tilt at the mills
Living in the world but like to be discrete

Calling aids with no return obsolete
Losing sense for the sound of hearts when break

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Anil Kumar Panda 27 July 2011

wonderful ink.matured thoughts put nicely on paper.liked it.

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Dr Antony Theodore 04 May 2010

Feeling like being carried away in wind Looking down at the people when drift Drowning in their own lives dreams Living in the world but like to be discrete i liked these lines dear shriin, i too like to be descrete and pen my poems. thank u for sharing this poem. i love ur poems..

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Saadat Tahir 10 May 2009

hi shirin very very nice so tender...and yes the agony of it we all feel great lines cheers

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powerful thoughts you put to ink in this piece.

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