This eve is abandoned itself
Lazy rays that desolate
Dust that shade and retreating
Open widows resonate sometimes
Open eyes glimpse wide eyes
Deserted alone in a corner
Dust covered and lifeless
Takes to the fathom of life trust
Animal life is liberal
Love hurts its path seldom
Relation never tie up anywhere
Loss life in a deserted corner
Pity alone in a crowd
Unclaimed and unaccustomed
Pull to the silence of emptiness
Curse of life that guaranteed
Boon of life admit itself
Loss life on the lap of a loved one
Priceless but worth more than gained
A peaceful voyage with a thrust! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !
©2014 SALINI.S.NAIR. All rights reserved.
Boon of life admit itself Loss life on the lap of a loved one Priceless but worth more than gained A peaceful voyage with a thrust! well penned
Very nicely composed with very touching words......a poignant write on the ultimate truth of life.......
Animal life is liberal Love hurts its path seldom Relation never tie up anywhere At times we feel that animal life is better than man's life! They are seldom hurt by the lack of love! Men sometimes are abandoned in life as well as in death! So sad!
Lazy rays that desolate, you open eyes with glimpse, pity alone in a crowd a man wanders and animal life is liberal than him. Very nice thrilling makes your poem living. Excellent touch given to this great work. May God bless you my daughter. Keep on writing marvellous poems.
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Animal life is liberal Love hurts its path seldom There are so many pains in human life that are not seen in animals. A beautift, thoughtful write.