Timothy Long

Rookie - 114 Points (September 11 1996 / Auburn, New York)

universe's beauty


the beauty astounded me, it was shining through my eyes with sparkling delight, as i looked at the stars with glowing planets and solar eclipses, to rainbows with in the sun for the rays change colors, the blue sky with fluffy clouds hanging above the dark night sky with it's yellow stars and glowing full moon, it made my soul brighter just looking up at the night sky, it is the universe beauty, i sit and watch it unravel the secrets to life, i try to see what god wanted everytime, i try to find the meaning of life on the meaningless planet, but whatever god wanted it was not meant for me to know today, but maybe someday soon i 'll know all that i want to know, but one thing for sure is that i became a star in the light of the eclipse and i outshine all, im part of the solar mix, im up high where i finally belong, and someday soon, others maybe able to join me, those who are worthy, but that's just part of the universe beauty

Submitted: Tuesday, November 05, 2013
Edited: Wednesday, November 06, 2013

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  • Gold Star - 13,881 Points * Sunprincess * (11/5/2013 12:41:00 PM)

    nice thoughts on the beauty of the universe... I wish I could see endless stars
    but the city I live in, it is good to catch a few :) (Report) Reply

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