Ben Gieske


- Until The Dreams (Etheree) - Poem by Ben Gieske

how
many
thoughts have passed
wisps of a breeze
rising and falling
swells of a rolling sea
cradled in the tide of life
flickers of sunlight making stars
the sun rises and keeps on shining
until moonlight transforms thoughts into dreams

Aug.7,2009

This poem was published in the last issue of SP Quill Magazine, Volume 6, Issue 22, Number 2, November of 2009


Comments about - Until The Dreams (Etheree) by Ben Gieske

  • Rookie - 115 Points Raihana Abdul Jabbar (1/18/2011 8:28:00 AM)

    Yes Sir....Thoughts turn into dreams...I adore the way u penned it down...
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  • Rookie Ritty Patnaik (12/16/2009 11:37:00 PM)

    dear ben.....another lovely poem from you.your feelings are beautifully placed in the lines of this poem.god bless you.
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Poem Submitted: Saturday, December 12, 2009

Poem Edited: Saturday, December 12, 2009


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