When I remember you
I think of us drunk-
sipping from pineapples
and paper umbrellas
at the shore-
The wind whispered fury-
with her salty breath
attacking sand dunes
and spreading secrets
When the sunset-
married the horizon
the tide changed
with the pesky moon
Dying messages carved
in the sand vanished-
with the ebb and flow
reminding us love-
is fleeting
We loved under
the stars for a-
lifetime
until we
danced off-
the face of
the earth
I like the way you personified the wind whispering & spreading secrets, and also the sunset marrying the horizon, painting vivid imagery in virtually every line...Nice one poet!
Robin, you have penned another beautiful poem.Your words have the power to make the reader see every image and feel every emotion. Your talent is amazing. Lynn Stillman
Hi! U r playing the imagination with words as if playing with pebbles, great. u r going to surpass greater more poets. with love subrat do u remember
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
A wonderful poem :) ................