oh paradise
hail the unforgettable sights
praise the glory of the breaking sun
honor Venus the morning star…
oh magnificent sky
hold the clouds forming rain
hold the strongest cruel storm
dispense to earth all day long...
oh wonderful rivers
flow like paths from the valleys
stones overlap depths
flow to the soundless sea…
oh brilliant friends
how many times did you asked me
if until when
until when my love exists...
My greatest chums
until there is midnight
Until there is sunlight
until there is music
until there is air
until there is you....
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A poem with heartfelt yearning so visible between fine lines Great work, lady,
This is a beautiful, expressive, and very touching write, Lady Grace, one clearly filled with much love, warmth, and emotion. It was a pleasure to read. Carl.
Beautiful work Naizz, there's a wonderful tone to this visual stunner.....really enjoyed this piece.....it kisses the mind..with words that warm the heart...well expressed 10
Last 5 lines highly meaningful........a wonderful poem to read
Excellent poem Grace with nature featured and also your friends. The last line is superb.... 10 love Karin
oh brilliant friends how many times did you asked me if until when…. if until when my love exists? .until tehre is you.until thre is cuck's voice heard in the morning...until i hear its chorus....let there shall prvail lull....it matters less..lovley write and i share each and every word with feeling....10 read mineyes yes yes....yes to to.... should we feel...
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
a wonderful poem on nature and values from a seasoned poet.thanx for sharing. a 10++++ from me. surya