an end so unlike the beginning
cried my heart out while i was laughing
flickered and died before my very eyes
cold flame burning fuelled by lies
so near yet so beyond my grasp
what i could've kept and made to last
it happened achingly on its own
the way night comes when day is done
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It was really a great poem written well with nice texture and imagery. Quite descriptive yet interesting. You have done a great job. Well done. Keep on writing. I rated it 10. Please read and rate my poem 'Abortion' on page 4. Warmest regards Akmal
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
thanks <3 i really appreciate your comments. though i write mostly for myself...its good to know that some people can appreciate my writings :)