Untitled Poem by David Lampitt

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they say true love is found while not looking
they say you kno when its real
they say its like nothing youve ever felt before
they say it makes your life rich when everythingelse seems poor
So does that mean if i give up today ill find it tomorrow
i doubt that to be true
im not looking anymore for its not what i need
all that i need is to kno one thing to be true
that you people love me just as i love you
for i care about these people and wish for nothing but there happiness
but when people say the words i love you to me theres a place deep down that tells me they are lying
but theres another part that wants to believe
but i need not worry those words have not been told
but for the people readin this let it be known
for as long as ive known you...even if it hasnt been long
for as long as weve been friends...no matter how close
ive always cared and for some ive loved its just hard for me to show
cuz love is something that to me.....is unknown

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Romeo Della Valle 06 January 2010

Dear David, first, you should title this poem: ...And I wonder! and about love, only time can tell, I have been there many times, if you read some of my poems you will find out....so, let it be, take one day at the time...what will be, will be...let the music plays...David, it shows you got a great talent and you are in the right track and in the right site...Keep it up, thanks for sharing,10+++, Love and Peace....Well penned!

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