Unusual Way Of Pleasure Poem by mohammad ahmadizadeh

Unusual Way Of Pleasure



I remember when I was eighteen
My friends and I would make a decision
Climbing the mountain


We climbed with filled pack fast
On a way which had been stepped in the past
Feeling safe on a permanently used path


I saw a barberry bush a little way off my touch
With red fruits next to a rock
Calling me to bunch


My desire and the barberry played ball
Taking me out of the way with a witching call
Making my fall


I passed over the rock barely to reach the berries
Began to berry them with no cease
Eating for my passion's ease


I came back the way but fell down
Flying and falling on a stone
Breaking my face and leg's bone


My body was fainted below my head bloody
But another me was flying yet above my body
Looking at it feeling deep tranquility


I did not forget those berries on that day
Tasting peace when I was fainted out of way
My life was going to be almost their pay


Glorious pleasure is out of the usual road
Without them our life is a heavy load
Ending with no worth

Friday, February 26, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: life,peace
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Gangadharan Nair Pulingat 26 February 2016

Very positively saw the success of life.

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Mohammad Ahmadizadeh 26 February 2016

Thank you dear friend for your compliment comment. It was encouraging.

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Uzefa Rashida M.a 26 February 2016

A concept presented in a very unique manner, we can taste the bliss of peace only if are ready to sacrifice our comfort and take risk. a brilliant description and beautiful use of words.

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Mohammad Ahmadizadeh 26 February 2016

Thank you dear Uzefa for reading it and your kind comment.

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