Unwelcome Guest Poem by ivor or ivor.e hogg

Unwelcome Guest

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Arthritis my old enemy
insidious and stealthy foe
attacks my joints determinedly.
An enemy I’ve come to know
as I grow old: Intimately.

I have no choice I must accept.
That when the weathers damp and cold
the aches and pains which I expect
return and take firmer hold
on any joint which they select.

This is the price I have to pay
for living to a ripe old age
There’s no effective remedy,
although pain killers may assuage
the pain temporarily.

When winter comes I stay indoors
resume my thermal underwear.
Don’t venture out without good cause
and if I must I take good care.
Make sure I’m warmly dressed of course.

Arthritis my old enemy
ensures that I obey the rules.
The limits which it sets for me.
Disobedience is for fools
prepared to suffer needlessly.

I won’t give in I can defy
if not defeat my enemy
It only means I have to try
to retain my mobility.
When normal rules do not apply.

18-Jan-08

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mary Gordley 20 January 2008

Ivor it is a very good poem about a most unwelcome condition. A good day to you.

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Ernestine Northover 19 January 2008

I'd have a brandy which will waarm the cockles of your heart and perhaps seep into those joints as well. I know the feeling you have described here, It has started in one of my fingers now, I am keeping my fingers crossed (which may help) that it doesn't spread into my other ones. Knees are a bit 'jippy' on occasions, and the bottom of the spine too. Yep, I reckon keeping active is the answer and the thermal underwear too. Really makes one feel sexy! ! ! ! ! ! Ha! Ha! Very wsell written Ivor, at your best once again. Love and hugs Ernestine XXX

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Thad Wilk 19 January 2008

Hi Ivor! Stay out of the cold, stay in the heat then maybe the pain it will deplete! *10*! Nice write! Thanks for sharing! ! Friend Thad

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Uloia Norris Moore 19 January 2008

Stay most warm hearty soul do defy.

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