V O P Poem by Bri Edwards

V O P

Rating: 5.0

A very old person soon I'll be.
Many of YOU will soon join me.
With our bodies sagging,
and our memories lagging,
no longer are we...to be 'free'!

(October 16th 2023)

bri edwards

:)

Friday, October 20, 2023
Topic(s) of this poem: old age,body,mind
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rose Marie Juan-austin 24 October 2023

A well crafted limerick. Top Marks!

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 24 October 2023

A meaningful and relatable poem so well expressed. Some say old age is a gift. Not all could reach this stage of life.However, there are some illnesses that could negate this gift.

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Nabakishore Dash 21 October 2023

I have already joined in vop dear Bri.

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Bri Edwards 26 October 2023

welcome to the club

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Anil Kumar Panda 20 October 2023

That is true. And I am already one. Nice poem. Thanks.

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Bri Edwards 26 October 2023

yet another member speaks up : )

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James McLain 20 October 2023

Great poem bri, looking forward to seeing more.

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Bri Edwards 26 October 2023

well, James, maybe not 'Great', but just FANTASTIC! ;)

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