White Bodies Poem by Mubeen Sadhika

White Bodies

Rating: 5.0


The buttery sweetness
spreads in the skin
milk sheds the taste
egg tenders the zest
the pale flavour adds
luster to the entwined
innocent giggles sounding
pallid gleams of silver

Translucent ivory finish
physiques conjoining
pearly opalescent composition
lying on the snow bed
with colourless lies
innocent lily-whites
sugared affection
on a glowing full moon.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jerry Abrahamson 24 September 2009

Great poem. Thanks for sharing it.

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Steven S 24 September 2009

I am impressed, and delighted... thanks for inviting me to give you a read.

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Last hakkaobake 24 September 2009

'Translucent ivory finish physiques conjoining pearly opalescent composition' I loved this thanks for telling me about it

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Jinny Goodwil 24 September 2009

luv dis..ur a gr8 poet..!

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Mohammed Hassan 28 September 2009

great work thanks for telling me and sharing it

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Claudia Krizay 11 May 2010

Great descriptions and excellent choice if words- thoroughly enjoyed this piece- thanks for sharing! Claudia

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Salu Salu 30 September 2009

good imagery..... thanks for sharing/salu

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Opeyemi Borisade 29 September 2009

coded...classy. Good job.

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Noel Horlanda 29 September 2009

Nice one, full of tasty recipes, less calories? I like butter, cheese and non-fat milk. No cholesterol please. Excellent write...cheers

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Patrick A. Martin 28 September 2009

I don't know why but I wanted to eat an apricot after reading this piece? ? 10

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