Visible Anxiety Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal
Visible Anxiety
Visible anxiety
Thursday,3rd January 2019
Whether you had told me or not
I could have still got you
from the crowd
with a simple hiss of word
I knew you had the number of questions
to hurl at me and wanted an answer in relation
I was prepared to for any query
that was to be raised not only by you but by many
I made the commitment
silently and secretly at the same moment
When you said "hello mister"
I turned around to answer
You had anger on the face
and wanted to chase
for blocking her road
I could read those lines
"For a minute" I answered and removed the vehicle
she was in the fit of rage struggling to control
I gave a smiling wave and she was gone
but she had created the special impression
many days later, I saw her in one reception
with the same temper and emotion
she recognized me in party
I too stared with no visible anxiety
Hasmukh Mehta
Lovely poem of the day, Hasmukh. Congrats for being chosen............................
many days later, I saw her in one reception with the same temper and emotion she recognized me in party I too stared with no visible anxiety.Making occasions permanent writing about it. and making the reader to think. thank u dear Hasmukhlal
A poem of a brief encounter that was to last? ....well written Hasmukhlal
Congratulation dear poet for the poem of the day...very worthy poem..
I know that I'm a much better poet than you. Do not dare to insult me again.
***We congratulate First Reflection (पहला प्रतिबिंब) (પ્રથમ પ્રતિબિંબ) Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Ji for his notable achievement and becoming the member poet of the day today and we are glad to read his valuable member Poem of the Day titled, 'Visible Anxiety, ' which is an outstanding poem. ***
Your effort of expressing social observation is highly appreciated. A perfect poem is selected as the Poem of the Day in member section.
CONGRATULATIONS! A great poem of social perception is excellently penned. You have recognized from a simple word inside the crowd and you have understood many questions. You saw her in one perception and you noticed anger in her face. Vehicle was removed at right time. An excellent sharing is done really. I shall give full 100/100 marks for this notable work.
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