Dave Alan Walker

Silver Star - 3,684 Points (Pudsey, Leeds)

Voices From The Other Side - Poem by Dave Alan Walker

Voices from the other side
coming through
loud and precise

Sometimes they think
they are alive
and we are dead

They get confused
because the living
never seem to live
their life

Making it harder
for them to survive
because they can't
understand why we
are alive and they are dead
when most of us waste our life


Comments about Voices From The Other Side by Dave Alan Walker

  • Rookie - 189 Points Stan Petrovich (6/20/2012 2:24:00 AM)

    David, I agree with you wholeheartedly that most of us waste our lives. It is an important insight, (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie Heather Wilson (6/13/2012 1:39:00 AM)

    A very good poem, reminded us to live our life to the full. (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 2,391 Points Hans Vr (6/11/2012 8:58:00 AM)

    Like this one a lot.
    Fantastic write.
    Let us live to the fullest (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,266 Points Valerie Dohren (6/11/2012 7:58:00 AM)

    The dead are sometimes alive, whilst the living are often dead - not sure which category I fall into! ! Sometimes the first, sometimes the second I guess. Good poem. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Eric Cockrell (6/10/2012 6:47:00 PM)

    hits like a hammer! great poem! (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 4,289 Points Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi (6/10/2012 7:12:00 AM)

    Dave, What is the meaning for other side? (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Simon Collins (6/10/2012 5:02:00 AM)

    Hehe love the second verse (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, June 10, 2012



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