Dave Alan Walker

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Evil Rising - Poem by Dave Alan Walker

It rises
like poison ivy
up walls of humanity

Evil is stalking
our minds
and our sanity

We must become one
to stop the evil rising
join together as one nation


Comments about Evil Rising by Dave Alan Walker

  • Terry Upham (3/27/2015 1:38:00 AM)


    Vladimir Putin evil but not looking for war. I'm glad you recognizewhat's going on. (Report) Reply

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  • (1/7/2015 10:52:00 AM)


    love it. using this for my homework! (Report) Reply

  • Amitava Sur (9/1/2014 6:09:00 AM)


    A lovely penning indeed. Because of our mean and selfish approach towards the society EVIL is raising it's head.We all have to stand unitedly against it to save ourselves only.

    You may read my poem Everybody will smile in benevolent peace ]
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  • Geetha Jayakumar (9/16/2013 11:05:00 AM)


    Wonderful poem...Great message, to stop evil rising, join together as one. (Report) Reply

  • Charnele Waith (11/9/2012 12:11:00 AM)


    so so true.. nice work (Report) Reply

  • (3/16/2012 5:00:00 AM)


    And the Evil is many things...Things we assumed were good: cars, petroleum, making a great deal of money, spawning loads of children, Sunday drives, salty fries, fat & sugar & the lies we fashion about the creation... (Report) Reply

  • Mendocino*poem-girl Martin (3/5/2012 11:39:00 AM)


    it was short but reasonable, i enjoyed it (Report) Reply

  • (2/13/2012 3:57:00 AM)


    wow! this is a nice piece, simple but with some sense.i like it (Report) Reply

  • Kuzo Freak (2/7/2012 4:27:00 PM)


    O h my goshes! ! I love it: P
    i agree that we need to stop eveil...
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  • (2/7/2012 11:31:00 AM)


    Hi David,

    it's a very topical message you have there, and completely to my way of thinking after the experiences of the last two years - my compliments to you :)

    Mark
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  • (2/6/2012 2:12:00 PM)


    This poem may be short, but the messgae is so powerful, I love it. (Report) Reply

  • (2/6/2012 2:12:00 PM)


    This poem may be short, but the messgae is so powerful, I love it. (Report) Reply

  • (2/6/2012 2:10:00 PM)


    Wow this poem may be short but the message is so powerful I love it. (Report) Reply

  • Njuguna Peter Mnyagia (2/5/2012 3:03:00 AM)


    prevention is better than cure.
    lets try it
    (Report) Reply

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (2/4/2012 6:28:00 AM)


    We must become one
    to stop the evil rising
    join together as one nation... very nice n positive thinking...alas we could do it.....10
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  • Jahan Zeb (2/4/2012 5:32:00 AM)


    Great, touching and makes thinking. The idea is human.... A proof poets are kind and love humanity. I bet this poem tell what you are from inside. (Report) Reply

  • (2/3/2012 10:43:00 PM)


    We must become one, to stop the evil rising, join together as one nation.

    I'll follow, list me.
    Thanks for your kind comment.
    Blessed be.
    (Report) Reply

  • Dave Dafes (2/3/2012 11:59:00 AM)


    Absolutely correct...Simple and short but speaks volume.. A great write, love it (Report) Reply

  • (2/3/2012 2:03:00 AM)


    Powerful words and plain truth... (Report) Reply

  • (2/3/2012 2:00:00 AM)


    Indeed, we need to join hands and stand together as citizens of the world. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, January 30, 2012

Poem Edited: Monday, January 30, 2012


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