Void, The Way Of Life Poem by Aniruddha Pathak

Void, The Way Of Life

Rating: 5.0


A kindly lady in a large house lives with her brother, both unmarried, both elderly, say, around seventy. Imagine you stay with them for two years— the two graceful hosts, more than the income from a paying guest, they care for some souls around. Soon you become part of that household. But then, you have to leave the town on transfer, they let you go with a heavy heart. It is difficult for you too to part. You promise to visit them soon and leave. But ‘soon' somehow gets stretched to three long years, and when you manage to visit, it is too late. Death, man's nearest companion, had called on them, and in a span of a few days, you come to know.

With some sense of sin
You tear away from the scene,
A void whirls within,

Draped in memories
Men oft live with heavy heart,
Void's the way of life.
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Haibun |07.08.2021|

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Another example of Haibun, , quite close to Haiku, but it precedes with a small para as a backgrounder, and followed by Haiku.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Susan Williams 23 January 2022

5 stars and I faved this powerful piece of warning

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Susan Williams 23 January 2022

this is too often a situation we find ourselves in and there is no cure for it--regret is its name and it cannot be changed into anything else---a powerful topic--5 stars

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Bharati Nayak 05 September 2021

A touching write. Beautifully expressed the sense of guilt and remorse.

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Kostas Lagos 03 September 2021

Excellent work! Fantastic!

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Indira Renganathan 03 September 2021

Very much an inspiring poem

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