Void Within Poem by SWAPAN DAS

Void Within

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If I had never felt the presence of thy love my lord in this life
Then me must not forget with all my eagerness this void within.

If I feel all the elation and ecstasy, my house is filled with wealth and riches
Then me must not forget that your alter is empty within.

If I enjoy the rhymes and rhythms of life and decor my dreams
Then me must not forget that I lack your blessings within.

If any in my weakest moment, I take rest being filled and fulfilled
Then me must not forget that my journey did not begin within.

Monday, October 17, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: spiritual
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Edward Kofi Louis 08 April 2018

Filed and fulfiled! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Jazib Kamalvi 30 March 2018

A fine start with a nice poem, Swapan. You may like to read my poem, Love and Iust. Thanks

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Kelly Kurt 23 October 2016

An insightful and nicely written poem, Swapan. Thanks

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Chinedu Dike 17 October 2016

Beautiful piece of poetry, well articulated and nicely penned in good diction with spiritual insight. The Divine Love of God, His Omnipresence, Omnipotence, and Omniscience nature are aptly captured in the poem. Thanks for sharing Swapan. Please read my poem POETIC MASTERPIECE.

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