Wait Not More Poem by MAHTAB BANGALEE

Wait Not More

Rating: 5.0


No sugar, no honey in the speech of cheater
No thorn, no dagger is hidden in the speech of hypocrite
But every time general peoples are cheated
- why?

No peace comes to the paths of waiting
No goodness of the earth comes to the paths of hope
But often general peoples blame the fate and time
-why?

Time has no existence
Good time comes not naturally
Fate is lame legs of laziness
Dream is not dream if it makes sweet sleep
Hope is not hope if it creates daydream
Imagination is not third eye of intelligent if it allows fairytales only

Let's we won't wait for the time and fate more
Let's we do right now some welfare deeds for the world together

Maybe we won't be cheated more
We won't blame each other's core

08.11.2020 Chattogram

Sunday, November 8, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: hoping,life,waiting,world
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Inspired by APJ ABDUL KALAM & MAWLANA RUMI
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Edward Kofi Louis 15 November 2020

Time! Waiting! ! ! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 09 November 2020

A very perceptive write on life. '' Dream is not dream if it makes sweet sleep Hope is not hope if it creates daydream." Wonderful lines to ponder about. An inspiring write.

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Yes true, no need to blame others, Untill we take the things positive. Thank you poet

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Bernard F. Asuncion 09 November 2020

A well crafted message. Truly magnificent....5 stars *****

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Poetic Sky 08 November 2020

If we collectively use our power in democracy then no crook can fool or rule over us.

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