Neela Nath


Waiting Eyes - Poem by Neela Nath

Twilight fell on your
sorrowful waiting eyes!
The snowy field, the horizon
and you, in the solitariness
cherished to hug life with
its warmth and coziness.
No wind to whisper in
your alert ears,
The sound of living world,
was blocked to drown
you in glued stillness.
I read the sadness in your
soft, tender eyes,
waiting not only
for the preys,
but to be hunted
by a beloved huntress!


Comments about Waiting Eyes by Neela Nath

  • Rookie - 415 Points David Wood (4/11/2013 8:16:00 AM)

    A haunting image of sad but alert eyes. A good write. (Report) Reply

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  • Veteran Poet - 1,284 Points Tarobinson1103@gmail.com Robinson (4/10/2013 3:08:00 AM)

    A perhaps long cold quest where time is the beast
    to be conquered. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 28,269 Points Valsa George (4/10/2013 3:00:00 AM)

    A moving portait of someone with sad eyes. A haunting image! (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 4,353 Points Tiku . (4/9/2013 7:04:00 AM)

    very nice.but to be.....hunted' is beautiful.liked it. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 39,733 Points Aftab Alam Khursheed (4/8/2013 10:03:00 PM)

    A well written poem very softly you wreath Twilight to huntress nice to read (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, April 8, 2013

Poem Edited: Wednesday, October 9, 2013


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