Lyn Paul

Gold Star - 15,213 Points (17.03.1965)

Waiting To Begin - Poem by Lyn Paul

Don't ever think
That I don't understand
That I don't know how you feel
That I won't hold out my hand
Please don't ever think
That I won't be there for you
That you are unimportant
And I have just too much to do
Don't ever think
That the pain will not heal
It is hurting so bad we know it is real
But please
You must think and also believe
That one step at a time is all you need to achieve
One step
One path
One new corner to turn
It can be done. This you will learn
You must know that there are many warm hands
Crying out to help
Just wanting to understand
So please, believe and let people in
There is Life out there for you just waiting to begin


Copyright Reserved May 2014

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Comments about Waiting To Begin by Lyn Paul

  • Gold Star - 8,652 Points Hazel Durham (9/11/2013 9:26:00 AM)

    Wonderful write full of great warmth and understanding with wisdom and kindness!
    Inspired write! (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 9,769 Points Khairul Ahsan (9/5/2013 11:08:00 AM)

    Wow, what an inspirational and wonderful poem! 10/10.
    'One step
    One path
    One new corner to turn
    It can be done. This you will learn'
    Beautifully said! a great poem, Lyn! (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,265 Points Pradip Chattopadhyay (8/31/2013 2:25:00 AM)

    very inspiring poem and a moving one. great write, Lyn. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,458 Points Unwritten Soul (8/29/2013 2:01:00 AM)

    It is a pleasing poem to read and inspire people to be more confident about self_Soul (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 8,965 Points Tirupathi Chandrupatla (8/27/2013 8:27:00 PM)

    one step at a time is all you need to achieve
    Well said. Rome was not built in a day. Beautiful poem. Thank you. (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 4,225 Points Valerie Dohren (8/25/2013 2:24:00 PM)

    A lovely thoughtful poem - we all need to reach out at times, and often feel that there is no one there for us. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,282 Points Robinson (8/24/2013 10:51:00 PM)

    That's what rulers are for, to measure one inch at a time progress.
    And to count on, one friend at a time.
    Waiting and beginning seem so different, but we are all waiting to begin... anew.
    But beginning anew is so much better if you can shate it with friends. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 9,259 Points Geetha Jayakumar (8/23/2013 1:03:00 PM)

    Beautiful poem..telling you care for them. Loved it Lyn.

    Thank you for the lovely comments for my poem Breaking News. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 10,101 Points Heather Wilkins (8/23/2013 8:49:00 AM)

    a lovely emotional poem telling someone you will be there for them. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Shashikant Nishant Sharma '? ? ? ? ? ' (8/23/2013 3:56:00 AM)

    Wonderful poem to express feeling and emotions of the widening distance between friends and beloved. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, August 22, 2013

Poem Edited: Thursday, July 2, 2015

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