Wake Me Poem by Valsa George

Wake Me

Rating: 5.0


Music sleeps.....
In my un strummed chords
I wait for the touch of skillful hands
To turn it into flowing melody
How long can I remain silent?
Oh touch me, shake me
Wake me from my slumber
Make me into a throbbing rhapsody

Set free this prisoner
To birth soothing chimes
Note after note in tiny wavelets
Let my vibrations carve circles
Growing bigger and bigger
Oh, give me the timbre and tone
Let me sing once more!

Let the music drizzle down
In healing murmurs
Lifting troubled spirits into calm repose
Leading them to a quiet fold
Free of all fever and fret
Let my soft rhymes
Fill the empty cisterns of the night,
Wooing the hearts
Weaving mystical spells

Let it rise and sink
And finally fade into
...A soft breath
....A hushed whisper
......A faint vibration
Over a gliding stream!

Wake Me
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rajnish Manga 17 May 2017

We all have been created by the Almighty. It is, therefore, natural for each one of us to pray, to strive and to attain a truly blissful state in life which would not only transform things on personal level but also in the life of those whom we come across during our social inter-action. The entire philosophy has been presented like a soulful musical notation. Thanks, Valsa ji. Wake me from my slumber Make me into a throbbing rhapsody

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Valsa George 17 May 2017

As ever you have hit the nail right on the head! This is exactly what I wanted to convey. Thanks dear Rajnish sir for your beautiful words!

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Kim Barney 16 May 2017

A magical poem, Valsa, my friend. Very enjoyable to read. Thanks for posting this.

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Valsa George 17 May 2017

I am so happy you liked it! Thanks Kim for stopping by to read my poem and dropping these words of encouragement!

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 17 May 2017

very beautiful I have been searching for ALMIGHTY yet I have not found it/HIM /WHAT/WHO IS except in the mind of men who are creative and strong Like you

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Soran M. H 08 August 2020

Let it rise and sink And finally fade into ...A soft breath ....A hushed whisper ......A faint vibration Over a gliding stream!

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Soran M. H 08 August 2020

Frankly, your poems have a great and tremendous poetic value, your language is not direct, but rather you are trying to express a new phrases and idea by using rhetoric devices, I share the style with you and agree with you, the poet should use the imagination elements to draw his poetic images, not only convey what is in reality as it is, congratulations Your poems write to themselves survival..10/10 and onto my fav list

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Soran M. H 08 August 2020

Set free this prisoner To birth soothing chimes Note after note in tiny wavelets Let my vibrations carve circles Growing bigger and bigger Oh, give me the timbre and tone Let me sing once more!

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Soran M. H 08 August 2020

I guess you are living poet life too, you write excellent poems

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Glen Kappy 22 January 2018

My first time reading this, Valsa. In the first person, I initially thought something like, Here’s an expression of a healthy libido (a la The bible’s Song of Songs) . Then, scrolling down, I saw the picture. I like this poem’s concept! -Glen

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