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Musfiq us shaleheen

Rookie - 546 Points (31st, December,1970 / Khulna, Bangladesh)

walking in the rain


rain drops on the tree
drops on the field of free -
drops on my face
feel me the god's grace

rain drops on the pond
i see your furry fond
rain drops on the fairyland
rose lost from my loosing hand

rain drops on the air
dreams fall in from here
rain drops on the grass
i am going to be crush

rain drops on my tears
the baby never be cared
rain drops on the sea
i feel her again to see

summer has become old
rain has seemed cold
i am walking in the rain
feelings are flowing in vain -

@ Musfiq us shaleheen
25th June,2014

Submitted: Tuesday, June 24, 2014
Edited: Tuesday, July 08, 2014

Topic(s): rain


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summer has grown old
rain has grown cold
i am walking in the rain
feelings are flowing in vain -

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  • Rookie - 619 Points Stephen Katona (7/16/2014 7:12:00 AM)

    Thank you for this emotional poem. You've brought together sadness and the beauty of raindrops very nicely. (Report) Reply

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