Wandering Poem by Naomi Waters
Wandering
Theres a girl
Out there
Alone
Afraid
Far from your assistance
She doesnt know where to go
What road to follow
Or how to make a choice
This girl has been abandoned
So now she doesnt know who to trust
Painfully aware of the people surrounding her
All of them predators with one single prey
Just try to be compassionate
There's a wandering girl that starves for it
Show her love
Kindness
Anything that could even reignite her hope
Your lives are going on around you
Dont you have a minute to spare for some orphaned girl
That has never known your passion
A cry for help That's what this poem seems like to me. You might be unorthodox Naomi, but you have a gift of expression and realism. Continue writing, keep exploring your thoughts. Best wishes, and good poem
thank you so much. You cant see it but im crying right now because of what you have said. im not sad in fact i feel so happy because of what you have told me :)
Oh wow! Piercing straight through heart. Makes me close my eyes and send a word of love to one in need. Thanks for sharing.
You are so kind! I feel very good about myself now because of your words
A woman trying to find a way out through the child in her, your words reminds me of a song by enigma...the child in us, oh well, I'm probably of track but a good poem and a good song
I dont think your off track. I cant get music out of my head either
imagine one single prey as their only prey or their number one prey I messed up and couldnt go back to fix it
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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Reading your made me sit back and feel so many emotions, and I think that is what true poetry is supposed to do. A wonderful poem dear Naomi. Peace and love: -)
That's very nice of you to say. Im so glad you liked it! Now I feel all warm and fuzzy inside.