Warrior Poem by Asia Ziedan MNSR

Warrior

Rating: 5.0


She's been hurt, shes's been torn and her heart is bleeding. There were times in her life where she would wish she'd just stop breathing, she became this emotional wreck, tears from his words running down her neck, she thought why's this happening to her? Must be a test? She used to be this lively, fun character, now her smile is gone, you've messed her up like it was some sort of disease. The words that came out of his mouth she couldn't believe, she's sick of his presence, she just wants him to leave. She sat there thinking that she doesn't deserve this, praying that someone could grant her wish, to take away her pain, for him to change his ways, to live up to his name, to not act the same and to change. There were times during the night where she endlessly cried, there were times in the night where she wish she just died, but this girl was strong and she knew she would survive, she's tough like a warrior that would fight for her life.

Warrior
Thursday, June 16, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: depression,heartbreak,love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Zainab Hussein Mns-r 22 June 2016

I was so touched. A lovely pick of words, and an amazing structure. I love your poem Asia

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Dr Antony Theodore 18 June 2016

there were times during the night where she endlessly cried, there were times in the night where she wish she just died, but this girl was strong and she knew she would survive, she's tough like a warrior that would fight for her life. very good poem on the great determination... this is an advise to all who are in such situations to try to come out of it and live and struggle and come up.. thank you very much dear poet. tony

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Kelly Kurt 16 June 2016

Nicely written piece, Asia. Thanks

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