We Are Done Poem by Jackie Oakden

We Are Done



Every moment of my life I've been lost
I almost had my hopes and dreams tossed
I wanted to give up my life with no cry
there was no point in asking why

I thought of this mess as a lie
so why should I try?
to go back and do my thing
when you had nothing to bring

(chorus)
you couldn't even bring back your love
you treated it as a big shove
so where did it even come from
would you think I'm so dumb?
you wouldn't even bring back your love
so I think for now we are done
yes we are done
(end chorus)

I have found someone new
he's kind and smart and not so rude
unlike you he's always there for me
I'm with him now why don't you go see?
(repeat chorus)

you seem to be upset well good thing
I don't want to see your face again
this time I had nothing to bring
now I don't want to be your friend
(repeat chorus)
(end of song)

[i wrote this song 5/1/09. As you can see i have more songs than poems.]

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

Thats ok. this is like poetry with the regularity of rhyming! good job jackie! ! 10++ Unique

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Jackie Oakden

Jackie Oakden

Palm Springs, California
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