You went away to catch your plane
One evening dark cloud laden night.
Pouring down cutting sheets of rain
Interfered with its timely scheduled flight.
We never got to say goodbye
I didn't make it there on time.
We had a fight before you left
And with that now that
Is a definite regret of mine.
We never got to say goodbye
Your plane I was told, had fallen from the sky.
Was struck by lightening over the ocean
It killed all loving parts of me
When I heard you died.
We never got to say goodbye
But I'm saying it now to you.
I'm asking for God's forgiveness and yours
I will always be in love with you.
I don't that it matters if this is a true story. It's a darn good poem. Rhythm is superb. Tom Billsborough
Remarkable poems, I hope that the plot is the unreal... 10.... Best wishes, Tsira
This is depressing..but I'm sure thats what you were aiming for. a 10..it was really good.
i wish i wrote this poem very nice and sad at the same time good job a 10+10=20
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Nicely done, sad...I wonder just how many loves part and never get to say goodby? Worst still to have parted bitterly...T