How I wish you could understand what I feel for you,
I loved you more than anyone could,
My love for you was always true,
Yet to see you happy in silence I stood!
When I was trying to make things work out,
Trying to keep myself calm,
You said our relation needs a breakout,
Your words to me did a lot harm!
Trusting you again was really hard,
And correct you proved me wrong,
I ended up crying in my backyard,
Now I am sure we will never get along!
A good poem. The emotion expressed are spontaneous and instantaneous. A good to start poet career Meg! Keep writing and keep scaling....................
thanks all of you...! pls keep reading and keep guiding me..! writing poems sets my heart free..! these compliments inspire me to write even more..! thanks once again.! :)
Great poem...keep writing...lovely.... :) I want you to read my poem Pain of heart...do comment/criticism....
thanks a lot Siyabonga a Nxumalo! these words are teaching me to be strong..! need to learn to move on also..! ll succeed in it soon..! :)
Great poem, well expressed and well penned.....hardships makes us stronger, prepare us for rainny days to come..some things are just not meant be, you need to learn to let go and forgive and forget...anyone who can't see your beauty and goodness is blind, im sure you dont wana waste your time with good-4-nothing guy.....keep writing..
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
A very lovely poem on an excellent theme, the flow is quite good i like the poem 100%, keep writing, future belongs to you.......the young. pls read my new poem.