This Earth
Becomes pain
When it rains
From the skies
Of one's eyes
Superb, Rain is good in both ways be it from clouds or eyes, it washes everything.10
rain from sky is welcomed but the rain from eyes are not solicited, well-composed poem, i enjoyed reading the poem, if you find time please read some of my poems and leave your comments.
Magnificent, Ali. I don't know how I missed this verse....To be able to touch the earth, even through tears. This goes to myfavourites.
when it rains from the skies of one's eyes- - - - - that, my friend, is an awesome image and it will not be forgotten. This is the joy of writing- -to write something that will linger in people's minds. Well-done. Exceedingly well-done! 10+
Tears of a loved one are always painful, nicely painted human sentiments'
How you say a lot in just a few words is an art. A lovely piece. I'm so impressed.10
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Verily, a lovely expression Loved reading it