Ali Adamson


Colours Dispersed... - Poem by Ali Adamson

(1)

Youth brings passion
of the way
beyond destination
just to play

I would dive
when it storm
for a pearl
in some charm
and it was later...
I came to know that...
I could sink!
that was PINK! !
...

(2)

I was lone...
I was half
the moment came...
I did laugh
and my heart...
cool in wine
a hand softly
held mine
when I saw...
that was you!
my life GREY...
turned BLUE!
...

(3)

Keeping hearts in their hands
thoughts creeping on their foreheads
tongues dried...
eyes narrowed...
they had travelled...
millions centuries
to this hell!
wishless creatures...

He who travels...
he will breathe!
He who stops...
a dagger will be
in his back...
this is BLACK! !
...

(4)

O dear listener!
O dear fellow!
O dear reader!
O dear me!

Let's feel...
let's listen...
when there is silence
... no one speaks!
and let's give
the way to roots
may this pale...
... love GREEN!


Comments about Colours Dispersed... by Ali Adamson

  • Nosheen Irfan (8/13/2016 4:53:00 AM)


    A profound work. It's interesting to see life through the spectrum of colors. Green symbolises hope n the way forward. Enjoyed reading. (Report) Reply

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  • Unwritten Soul (8/7/2016 1:47:00 AM)


    Spectrum is your skin color, the same colour when you speak and write...A beautiful work..really nice Ali (Report) Reply

  • Soulful Heart (6/27/2014 2:11:00 AM)


    a rainbow of life's journey.....................but green is that takes you forward with hope...........may u stay so... (Report) Reply

  • (4/28/2014 1:44:00 AM)


    lovely poem.....expressing the colours of life. (Report) Reply

  • Soulful Heart (3/3/2014 11:17:00 AM)


    The colour of life itself.....a blend of pink blue black yet its upto us to keep it forever green.....a poem that surely will b evergreen... (Report) Reply

  • Tirupathi Chandrupatla (12/27/2013 4:11:00 AM)


    Colors are spreading everywhere. Every color extending its own charm. Life is a delight. Nice poem. Thank you. (Report) Reply

  • Shahzia Batool (12/19/2013 11:52:00 AM)


    the life is seen through the allegory of colors,
    a well-wrought composition,
    and with many memorable phrases like:
    He who travels...
    he will breathe! ...
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  • (7/21/2009 5:21:00 AM)


    a wonderful poem, i enjoyed reading it.10+++ (Report) Reply

  • (5/28/2009 9:10:00 AM)


    i love this
    Colours Dispersed is a great name for this...10 +++
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  • (5/20/2009 12:40:00 AM)


    wow
    lovely
    u made me dip myself
    in those myraid colours of the rainbow
    a tenner from me
    anjali
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  • (5/19/2009 1:27:00 PM)


    Shashendra Amalshan (5/19/2009 1: 27: 00 PM) | Delete this message
    Let's feel...
    'let's listen...
    when there is silence
    ... no one speaks!
    and let's give
    the way to roots
    may this pale...
    ... love GREEN'
    very true indeed, ....love green..great poem for the modern times....wish u well Ali...son of Adam...10++++
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  • (5/15/2009 4:19:00 AM)


    wow, ...what a poem dear friend....wish you all the best :)

    Hataw
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  • (5/15/2009 2:12:00 AM)


    hi Ali...
    this is really colourful poem... i like how the color go with the events... your an amazing poets..keep writting...
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  • Rajkumar Mukherjee (5/14/2009 12:43:00 PM)


    Dear Ali,
    This is a really good poem linking colours with life in its various exposition. All colours added together is White and absense of all colours make it Black. Without a really large White canvas you coudn't have made this large picture with giant and fine strokes.The only colour missing in your cavas is Red which is now covering most of the land, the Earth is having, through Terrorism, economic and political wars.The choice of words, presentation of imagery and overall the poem is thought provoking. Thanks for sharing A-10- from me -Rajkumar
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  • Saadat Tahir (5/14/2009 7:08:00 AM)


    hi Ali

    u went rt through the rainbow....and painted a huge canvas in giant strokes
    great writing
    cheers
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  • (5/13/2009 1:41:00 AM)


    Reading and re-reading I am still trying to find out the entire beauty of the verse. (Report) Reply

  • Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr (5/12/2009 1:00:00 AM)


    Quite an apropos title for this poem, as it takes on a spectrum of pictorial, and flamboyant imagery...Well Done, Ali.

    F j R
    (09)
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  • (5/11/2009 4:50:00 AM)


    it feels so good 2 read this....its wonderfully written.... (Report) Reply

  • (5/10/2009 5:30:00 AM)


    very beautiful lines, deep meaning
    thanks a lot
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  • (5/10/2009 3:37:00 AM)


    U hv really painted abeautiful poem here..love ur thought process.. n also including urself in the listener's list is a great sign of humility...God Bless: -) 10+++ (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, May 7, 2009



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