What Happened To Us? Poem by chidiebere franklin

What Happened To Us?



What happen to us?
We use to be cool
And now we don’t even hang out around school

Where did the old days go?
Where we use to laugh and talk, joke around
Now were never near each other on the ground

I feel like we fought over stupid stuff
And even though times get rough
We are suppose to be tough

Don’t you feel like we created a wall?
In between us when we walk down the hall
I believe that it’s not right
That we got in a fight

Worst of all we got in a fight over a boy
Who was like a used up toy
Why can’t we understand that he broke our hearts
And then, one by one, tore us apart

And now he’s buttering me up
Saying that he loves me but do you think I am tough
Enough to say no
To the little boy who is a ho*

Now let me ask you a question
And maybe people have new suggestions
To what happen to us?

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
David Munene wa Kimberly 25 March 2010

The idea behind the poem is quite keen on real observation of girl life (oh I know so lil' about that... :)) . For check-up points though, observe the influence of accent (pidgin) so it doesn't deteriorate your great poetry.

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