What If I Told You... Poem by Kurt Behle

What If I Told You...

Rating: 5.0


I wanted to tell you
That you are my only boo
I wanted you to know that I once dreamed of you
That you are my everyday wish
My lovely sunday dish
But what if I told you

I wanted to tell you
That you hurt me so bad when you ignore
I wanted you to know that I once hated you
But what if I told you

I wanted to tell you
That you touched my heart
I wanted you to know that I always feel your heat
To call you my sweetheart
But what if I told you

I wanted to
Really I wanted you to know
The secret I kept
Words that remained packed
What if I told you
That I really wanted you to know
That I really loved you
You really blowed words in my heart...

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Eyan Desir 05 May 2009

Very nice good write

0 0 Reply
Mohau Patric Maine 05 May 2009

u r the great poet in making, never loose that enthusiasm bruu

0 0 Reply

Just such sensitive work Kurt. Telling someone you love them when you are in love can make you vulnerable, and frightened of rejection, but it is something that can be shouted out to the world as the feeling is so unbelievable.! You have expressed yourself wonderfully and I think it is great! 10 Karin Anderson

0 0 Reply
Nangula Immanuel 08 May 2009

aww! That is so sweet. Very well written as well, i like! !

0 0 Reply
Kesav Easwaran 08 May 2009

good expressive write...emotions filled...love is funny ball game...often scores sameside... good work, Kurt...10

0 0 Reply
Naidz Ladia 07 May 2009

great expressions from your heart...what if i told you? ...a very nice piece with question and an answer..very nice..naizz

0 0 Reply
Dakotas Angel 05 May 2009

I really like that and i can relate to it easily keep it up its very fine work

0 0 Reply
READ THIS POEM IN OTHER LANGUAGES
Close
Error Success