What Is A Line? Poem by Liza Sud

What Is A Line?

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What is a line?
It's like passing by.
It's like I go and leave all
behind.

I feel so free,
so innocent.
All is a moment
from here to there.

That's how line
symbolizes life.
That's why it makes
so calm your mind.

From nowhere -
to the last dot.
An in its measure -
the pace of walk.

Music is even more
than a line.
It shows how brokenly leaps
your life.

But by its soothing
and calming notes
it resembles
the voice of God.

Monday, August 15, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: light
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Daniel Brick 16 August 2016

You present three aspects of art: the LINE of poetry / the LINE of music or melody / the VOICE of God. You describe the positive effect of each in turn. The first two are human art, human creations, the last is a kind of divine intervention, and all three enhance our life with a mission for meaning beyond just existing moment to moment.

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Ratnakar Mandlik 15 August 2016

Nice concepts: Music shows how brokenly leaps your life. It's soothing and calming notes is like voice of God. Thanks for sharing.

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