Zahra Shariat

Rookie - 184 Points (Iran, Tabriz)

What's a tear drop? Poem by Zahra Shariat


-What's a tear drop? did you ever know?
-It's NaCl dissolved in H2O!

-Can you help my broken heart my sole injury?
-I can't do operations like Heart Surgery

-this means you don't mind emotions a bit?
(a thinking moment passed) , 'I must Google it! '

this boring dialogue she prefered to stop
she left that 'Intelligent Companion' shop

Submitted: Monday, November 05, 2012
Edited: Tuesday, November 06, 2012

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Comments about this poem (What's a tear drop? by Zahra Shariat )

  • Freshman - 923 Points Musfiq Us Shaleheen (7/13/2014 6:36:00 AM)

    the chemistry of tears and physics of the love.... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 355 Points Sina Farajzadeh (7/7/2014 6:22:00 AM)

    Hello. This is like a nrsey rhyme and not a serious work. Literature exams are not useless. One who studies this field should pass its exams. Bytheway, poetry is not just rhyming. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 9,211 Points Mr. Nobody (4/23/2014 10:19:00 AM)

    This is a great fast little write! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Khalsa Majarafi (1/5/2014 1:56:00 AM)

    WoW.....I like it every time I read it (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Howard Johnson (1/15/2013 12:48:00 AM)

    A intresting blend of chemistry, and poetry, thank you for sharing (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Daegonius Bonapartae (11/30/2012 12:59:00 PM)

    you humans have got to be kidding me seriously. something like this forgery is so simplistic a mere infant could have typed it. It leads me to question any of you to even calling yourself poets. simply astounding how you imbeciles think this kindergarten rhyme is a master piece simply embarressing to even mention it (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Mousa Mohammadnia (11/29/2012 3:23:00 PM)

    So good. I enjoyed. I'm waiting for reading you more poet! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Kelly Seale (11/15/2012 3:12:00 AM)

    Zahra, this was quite a refreshing read-
    You allowed your muse to entertain us, with wit...
    even though he was a bore,
    and I loved how it all ended
    whith you walking out the door...

    Outstanding Ink! Loved it! ; -)
    -Kelly. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 4 Points Nader Baheri (11/6/2012 10:03:00 AM)

    nicely penned dear zahra with marvelous rhyme.teaches us chemistry too.enjoyed it
    muchas gracias for sharing~nb (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 184 Points Zahra Shariat (11/6/2012 3:20:00 AM)

    well, thank you but, i think it has some rhythm strikes! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Asif Andalib (11/5/2012 9:38:00 PM)

    Beautiful words flow and rhyme. Great poem (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,094 Points Xelam Kan (11/5/2012 5:57:00 AM)

    wow...hahahahah what a style....., fabulous, how did you do this? you could lots of of more thing in this list...isn't? (Report) Reply

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