When all hunters meet,
the queen's language
suffers under dictionery's
pilate.
The broken souls are mended,
dilemites are soothed,
ignorance is swept.
Only when they meet at poemhunters.com jungle,
ideas are examined by the globe without being warmed,
obscene hunters are barnned.
Only when all hunters meet in one jungle.
nouns, verbs, adjectives, conjuctions
are merged into poems.
Truly amazing! And very poetical! And I like the message! Truly a piece of art! It would be my honor if you read mine! ..You're one great poet!
totally true, when all those meet the poem come out, well write
I think your metaphor of hunters in the jungle is a most apt one for we disparate folk who inhabit PoemHunter.com. Survival of the fittest could well be part of your theme as those who are not prepared to read and listen and learn usually dropp by the wayside. Your last stanza is particularly impressive. I can see all the nouns, adjectives, adverbs and the like gathering around the poetic waterhole and comparing ideas. Thanks for sharing this. Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥
jungles of hunters r like kingdom of poets.. poets composed of popular nd non popular defend their words by comments shows their lines how great they r.. brain are placed to control other parts below like king ruled his kingdom.. ths jungle s full of highly intellectual people who build heaven n earth by their poetries they made their own identity identity to make themselves a 'somebody'.. n ths jungle, all r equal free to move and free to kill but hpe we wont frget the word ''respect'' to maintain each others good relationship.... for in ths kingdom, we are one family... we r all living things from different countries... let our love bloom and friendship never fade... lets talk with less pride no bad feelings........ i talk wth my hearts' open, no lies n it.. ths s how i consider myself a poet n ths jungle.... owwww....cheers aubrey...
Nice picture of this website with huge data base. The simli of hunters and jungle you have used in the title and in the verse reflects not only the title of the website but shows the vastness of poetic world mingling in words.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
A great piece of work Aubrey...