When An Isolated Soul Anchored Poem by nimal dunuhinga

When An Isolated Soul Anchored

Rating: 5.0


In the Ocean of Life when a soul anchored
Rocks gently, touch the warm breeze
And search the homeland.
Life hides within its walls
And no way to cast off.
Though you see the smiling island at a distance
It's impossible to heave up the rusty anchor
As it stuck in the rock bottom.
If not the poor visibility
You could see the wreckage from the illusory shore.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Alison Cassidy 19 September 2009

Your choice of words is always so expressive and unusual. The impact of this poem poetry is profound and most appealing. Such a homesick poem. Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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Sandra Fowler 16 September 2009

The restless soul longing to have what once was, but can never quite be again. Beautifully composed.10/10. Warm regards, Sandra

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Bryan Alexander 16 September 2009

it says so much in such a short time. great poem

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kalubovila East, Sri Lanka
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