When Fallen In Love. Poem by Ravi Panamanna

When Fallen In Love.

Rating: 5.0


When eyes meet
A spark is born.
Hearts are shaken,
Nerves are broken!

Dreams are born,
To an exciting world, man is thrown.
Sleep is gone,
To a sensation he is drawn.

A light glows within,
He feels he has reached the inn.
The seeds are sown,
Poems are born!

He is in a long flight,
He is in a world so bright.
He is near a spring,
He flies as if he has wings!

He meditates upon a singular face,
His life is full of grace.
He is caught within beauty,
He calls her ‘so sweety’.

Pastures are seen,
He is full of wine.
Solitary moments are heavy,
It marks the beginning of lunacy!

She too is in the same mood,
They wish to meet in the woods.
Far from the maddening crowd
They wish to be in their own moments.

Thus, under the greenwood tree
They meet – gay and free.
In tune with the silent Nature
They let their love to its natural course.

Fountains begin to open,
Two hearts are in silent communion.
It is all a melodious music,
It is all a twinkling Space.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

a lovely romance there..expressive write sir

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Naidz Ladia 16 May 2009

as if i don't want to stop reading..this is very nice...naizz

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Sathyanarayana M V S 16 May 2009

What happens when first love happens? I think this poem is a good answer. Very well written.

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Fay Slimm 16 May 2009

'Two hearts in silent communion' - -and making melody too - - a fine poem and a 10 from Fay.

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Carol Gall 17 May 2009

and love is born wondrful poem

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‘…The seeds are sown, /Poems are born! ‘ Beauty I say beauty …’poetry-love’ …‘love-poetry’ are but same…love finds full culmination in fairy poetry…thanks Sir 10/10 Ms. Nivedita UK

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Vidi Writes 28 May 2009

Absolutely fine tuned All feelings, one by one Like being in a queue... Wonderful feelings Dear poet, You took us back to those days. Wonderful write. Thank you.

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Shashendra Amalshan 22 May 2009

very well expressed indeed...I liked it very much...enjoyed it to the fullest extent..thanks 10+++=

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Kranthi Pothineni 22 May 2009

Once again fully enjoyed the read. Its an amazing write.

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Indira Babbellapati 18 May 2009

the rich beat the poem has in fact is the beat of the heart in love!

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Ravi Panamanna

Ravi Panamanna

Ottapalam- Kerala State- India
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