**~~when He Saw My Tears**~~~ Poem by negar shahnouri
**~~when He Saw My Tears**~~~
when he saw my tears he said still loves me
but his previous words had broken my knee
how can i forget day u ignored my pain
i really wanna know that what did u gain
day i cried
day i died
what should i blv, smile or anger
wish u could give me a straight answer
just dont say u love me coz it belongs to past
our love was a movie with ur wonderful cast
in twilight of memory we may meet under rain
but i bet tht day u will leave again! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !
Your words flow is very beautiful. I read so many of this kind of broken-heart/love poems. But you are best..........believe me! ! ! You are best!
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4/27/2024 5:04:39 PM # 1.0.0.1119
Your closing stanza offers two different hopes. One is that the love will forever live in your memory so that you can revisit it in your imagination; the second is that you are reunited in the real world. Do you want both? If I were one of the jinn, you would still have one more wish.I think it should be: Make him worthy of my love and devotion. There is no excuse for a man to treat a woman so badly. If love does not make a man a better man, he has sinned against love. Seeing the tears that he caused should be enough to make any man ask for forgiveness.