ben burgess


When You Smile - Poem by ben burgess

When you smile my day becomes anew,

When you smile I forget I was ever feeling blue,

When you smile my spirits are lifted,

When you smile it’s like you’re gifted,

When you smile we become as one,

One big smile bigger than the biggest sun,

More radiant than those powerful rays,

When you smile you light up my darkest of days,

When you smile everything else becomes insignificant,

When you smile you look so magnificent,

When you smile you’re like a wheel in motion,

The cogs of your brain turning with devotion,

Around and around this feeling sends me in a spin,

A complete feeling of happiness deep within,

When you smile.




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Comments about When You Smile by ben burgess

  • Rookie - 116 Points Prince Obed de la Cruz (6/19/2010 4:02:00 AM)

    reminds me of girl i always think of for 3 years already.... (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie walm zand (9/8/2009 1:44:00 AM)

    What a joy if one can smile.....
    Loved the poem, describes very well the great joy of happines! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 9 Points Linda Winchell (8/19/2009 8:51:00 PM)

    I like to smile so I can relate to this one really well. Great poem! Keep writing. God Bless, Linda (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, August 19, 2009

Poem Edited: Wednesday, August 19, 2009


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