Manonton Dalan

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.... While My Hands Hang On Your Hips


i felt you touch my heart
again deeper than you think
if your word is whole cake
i will slice it so thin
barely floating on my tongue
then i close my lips gently

i will close my eyes, dream
of you with your sweet smile
longing for a long soft kiss
i can feel your finger nails
rising along my ribs, very sharp
it tickles to slight pain, cruel

Submitted: Thursday, June 28, 2012
Edited: Friday, June 29, 2012

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  • Rookie - 340 Points Captain Cur (5/16/2014 10:36:00 PM)

    while my hands hang on your hips
    your sweet smile, dream, long soft kiss
    loved your poem (Report) Reply

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