Whisper Poem by Kelsea Osterman

Whisper



Do you hear it.
Do you hear the faint whisper.
The whisper that carries her last breath.
The breath she used to say I love you with.
not done
*I need some help if you read this send me a message and tell me what else to write give me an idea**

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Unwritten Soul 25 November 2011

if i have to continue this i will write: Dont you listen with your heart The words she whispers on your soul Could be real or it just in a dream A whisper that never end Do you hear it Or you ignore it ..............What you think? ? hahaha it just a write though to fit what you already started :) Unwritten Soul

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Jenny-lynn Lavoie 23 April 2011

do you see it do you see the pain she has suffered do you see her body weakended withered away to almost nothing the room is consumed with silence where her lifeless body lies all forever cherish her faint whisper that said I love you for her final goodbye

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Kare Bear 08 April 2010

you could add: the last breath she used to show her affection. it was colder then winter itself. and that last breath she took, was one worth to remember. it was her last breath, and her last whisper. and to this day, he can still feel her breath in his face as she whispered 'i love you' -your welcome! (=

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