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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK (12/9/2009 11:46:00 AM)
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Nature has ‘come-alive-live’…
Enjoyed to the lees and thanks…
Ten+
Ms. Nivedita
UK
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premji premji (12/2/2009 4:22:00 AM)
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my soul is still in your poetry....
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Sally Plumb Plumb (9/28/2009 9:07:00 AM)
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Beautiful, beautiful, beautiful... as stunningly usual.
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Shashendra Amalshan (7/19/2009 1:37:00 AM)
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this got Sandra flower flavor written all over indeed ma'am.. i enjoyed it as always.. just randomly picked this one and read it.. and you know what ma'am.. the title was an intriguing one.. that's why i wanted to read this one! ! ! ! ! ...
good thing u changed the title is nt it.. this is nice write....
with lots of love
shan
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Yoonoos Peerbocus (5/10/2009 11:28:00 AM)
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parting is a moment of maturity...to be with but not of.....the message is subtle as all mature poetry is
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Sonya Florentino (4/22/2009 7:30:00 PM)
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a very powerful moment, having to say goodbye but not wanting too... i don't think I can bear to watch the ending....
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palas kumar ray (3/23/2009 6:38:00 AM)
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''Against a vast infinitude of sky.
Hands tighten on the sheer edge of the night.''
Away from the world somewhere deep within the bossom of love they remain clasped...
A lovely portrait.
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Kesav Easwaran (8/12/2008 4:05:00 AM)
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Good imagery artfully built around words- rigid…ice…stone...cold…stiff… a whisper that came floating from a distance into vast sky- mind- lies underneath to it –on grass- lifeless…hand in hand tightened though… what feels stiffness? Yes, the vast sky- the mind…
The poem ten plus grade...
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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof (4/6/2008 3:30:00 AM)
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whisper it to my ears...............your poem...........such a huge fascination...........
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