(2006)

What do you think this poem is about?

Who will stand?

Hmmm,
How do you-
or
is there even
a way
to determine
whether or not
a man understands the gravity of his station as a father?

I am not sure.

Of course,
I can surmise
that a man who understands the gravity
digs his feet in, and stays-
come what may.

And I can surmise
that a man who doesnt understand
his importance
runs away.

But where do you put the ones
who slink away...
solely because they do
understand the importance
and the gravity of being a father,
yet refuse to rise to the challenge?

Are they men at all?

Submitted: Monday, May 29, 2006


Comments about this poem (Who will stand? by Noemi Lee )

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  • Brian Dorn (8/23/2006 5:12:00 PM)

    Brilliant write, Noemi... I love the way the poem developed and you stuck the ending! !
    Brian

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  • Joseph Daly (5/29/2006 9:48:00 AM)

    This really grabbed me Noemi. So tightly structured and a theme that refuses to go over the top. Written from a woman's view I feel that you suceed in portraying a universal issue. Yes, there will be those who will find much to empathise in this, but I feel that that is not your intent. A very impressive read my friend.

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