Faythe Taylor


Why Can't You See?


You left me sitting there alone on a park bench
I waited for you
But you were never there

Why can't you see
your killing me
Why can't you see
your hurting me

I just wanted to be happy
and you just couldn't listen
now im sitting here
with a shotgun to my head

Waiting to see if any one will stop me
I sit to see if anyone cares
I thought you out of all people
would come and rescue me

But you left me sitting there alone on a park bench
now i lay coverd in blood
Oh Why can't you see
you just killed me?

Submitted: Tuesday, July 01, 2008
Edited: Wednesday, July 02, 2008

Faythe Taylor's Other Poems

Do you like this poem?
0 person liked.
0 person did not like.

Form:


Read this poem in other languages

This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.

I would like to translate this poem »

word flags

What do you think this poem is about?

Comments about this poem (Why Can't You See? by Faythe Taylor )

  • Rookie Sandy nobody (7/1/2008 11:36:00 PM)

    so filled with pain and emotions faythe...good poem..but trust me the pain does get better with time...and wrting it out helps a lot...hugs (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Carly David (7/1/2008 10:51:00 PM)

    I can feel the emotion you put into this.
    I love it. (Report) Reply

Read all 2 comments »

Famous Poems

  1. Phenomenal Woman
    Maya Angelou
  2. Still I Rise
    Maya Angelou
  3. The Road Not Taken
    Robert Frost
  4. If You Forget Me
    Pablo Neruda
  5. Dreams
    Langston Hughes
  6. Annabel Lee
    Edgar Allan Poe
  7. I Know Why The Caged Bird Sings
    Maya Angelou
  8. If
    Rudyard Kipling
  9. Stopping by Woods on a Snowy Evening
    Robert Frost
  10. A Dream Within A Dream
    Edgar Allan Poe
Trending Poets
Trending Poems
  1. Still I Rise, Maya Angelou
  2. Phenomenal Woman, Maya Angelou
  3. If You Forget Me, Pablo Neruda
  4. The Rose that Grew from Concrete, Tupac Shakur
  5. I Know Why The Caged Bird Sings, Maya Angelou
  6. The Road Not Taken, Robert Frost
  7. Daffodils, William Wordsworth
  8. As I Grew Older, Langston Hughes
  9. Annabel Lee, Edgar Allan Poe
  10. Dreams, Langston Hughes
[Hata Bildir]