Winter Sun Poem by Philo Yan

Winter Sun



Rounded sun so very bright,
Fading fast on soft snow white,
Slowly, creeping windless cold,
Anew and the passing old.
Quickly, recedes the warm.
Silent scenery transform.

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
A fellow artist painted a bright setting sun set in a secluded winter forest.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Philo Yan 21 September 2012

Hi Nurain Ali-balogun, I just started writing poetry. Is there a significance with regards to the six lines and fourty-two syllables? As for the seven syllables, the words came to me as I look at the painting. I appreciate and thank you for your comments. ----------------- Thank you Unwritten Soul for your comment. Just would like to know which pic are you referring to?

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Unwritten Soul 21 September 2012

Lovely write and the pic was awesome! ! ! loved it_Unwritten Soul

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Nurain Ali-balogun 21 September 2012

Six lines and fourty-two syllables... Brilliant. The seven syllables, it is just your style or a poetic phenomenon I don't know about?

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