Philo Yan

Freshman - 628 Points (Malaysia)

Winter Sun


Rounded sun so very bright,
Fading fast on soft snow white,
Slowly, creeping windless cold,
Anew and the passing old.
Quickly, recedes the warm.
Silent scenery transform.

Submitted: Friday, September 21, 2012
Edited: Friday, September 21, 2012

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A fellow artist painted a bright setting sun set in a secluded winter forest.

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  • Freshman - 628 Points Philo Yan (9/21/2012 6:45:00 AM)

    Hi Nurain Ali-balogun,

    I just started writing poetry. Is there a significance with regards to the six lines and fourty-two syllables?
    As for the seven syllables, the words came to me as I look at the painting.

    I appreciate and thank you for your comments.
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    Thank you Unwritten Soul for your comment.
    Just would like to know which pic are you referring to? (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,092 Points Unwritten Soul (9/21/2012 4:59:00 AM)

    Lovely write and the pic was awesome! ! ! loved it_Unwritten Soul (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 5 Points Nurain Ali-balogun (9/21/2012 4:39:00 AM)

    Six lines and fourty-two syllables... Brilliant. The seven syllables, it is just your style or a poetic phenomenon I don't know about? (Report) Reply

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