Wishing Poem by Asif Baloch

Wishing



Words float in the sky
Soul put a sad smile
Heart gave a painful cry
Tears drop'd from
once empty eyes
Asking for love but
no love to find
Clouds of saddness are
spreading up above high
Weeping and crying with
feelings of deniel
Left alone and no one
by my side
Thoughts of lonliness
are eating me alive
Wishing for death but
could not die

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
*Trusting You* 06 December 2008

Thoughts of lonliness are eating me alive great lines... that is why I cant be alone... it eats me alive to no end. great job. Becca

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Ashraful Musaddeq 19 October 2008

'Thoughts of lonliness are eating me alive Wishing for death but could not die' Another poem that touches inside. Feeling gloomy.

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