Wishing In Vain Poem by Valsa George

Wishing In Vain

Rating: 4.9


How I wish my poems could,
Soar higher and higher
Like a bird of limitless wingspan,
Darting into horizons far!
But they skim like web footed water birds,
Tilting their wings in vain,
Unable to fly to any desired destination
Helplessly watching loons and larks
Flying to the far edges of the sky

How I wish my poems could
Sail across the limitless expanse
Like parting ships bound to distant lands
Carrying my fancies to the ends of the Earth!
But they remain like paper boats
Set to sail by mischievous kids
That drift hither n’ thither on muddy puddles

How I wish my poems could
Wind their way down slopes and dales
Like a fountain stream running down
To join the sea, travelling miles.
But they slither like snakes,
Struggling to move on polished floors

How I wish my poems could,
Grow out from chrysalis to butterflies
To flit around flowers and feed on nectar
But they ever remain such creepy worms
Destined to hide behind blades of leaves

How I wish, like an inspired artist
I could paint on my canvas, with deft hands
The lustre and glory of the setting sun
The freshness and beauty of the spring flowers
The scary grandeur of the mountains
The silence of the lonesome lagoon
The dark majesty of the unlit groves
The sunlit glades of trackless forests
And scenes and sights, so varied and myriad
That I could array before you in magic shades
The wonders of an unseen paradise

But, Alas! What I leave on my canvas
Is just a banal scene!
And my poems, like kites tangled
Among the branches of trees
Are denied upward movement!

Still I don’t regret my efforts…..

Like the lyrics of a half forgotten melody
My poems delight me
In my sequestered hours of loneliness!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Akhtar Jawad 12 June 2014

Your poems are nice, but the desire to write more beautiful poems is something positive.

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Walterrean Salley 10 August 2013

This piece speaks for all of us. It has such a beautiful feeling to it. I love and enjoyed it Valsa.

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Tadasha Tripathy 22 May 2014

The unlimited sky is open here to fly away with poems. I liked reading this poem. Thanks.

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Tadasha Tripathy 22 May 2014

The unlimited sky is open here to fly away with poems. I liked reading this poem. Thanks.

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Tadasha Tripathy 22 May 2014

The unlimited sky is open here to fly away with poems. I liked reading this poem. Thanks.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 09 June 2019

You are one of the finest Poets on this site. Your poems can soar the heavens above. Most of your poems that I have read have been beautifully crafted and executed. A wonderful poem excellently penned, as always. Liked reading this write. So humbling.

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Edward Kofi Louis 13 July 2016

Like an inspired artist. Nice piece of work.

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Loke Kok Yee 22 October 2015

Your poems have reach the stars and back and on the way you have shown many the right way truly now you are sitting among the top of the stack and there you will forever stay Thanks Valsa-10+++

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Brian Stafford 23 April 2015

congrats on poem, and getting poem of the day!

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Kim Barney 23 April 2015

Very well done. I have no regrets for including you in my poem POETRY HEAVEN.

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