With Fresh Start Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

With Fresh Start

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I have found you
Simple and true
Ordinary but confident
Lives in real present world

You might have failed many
But I have come to rule really
I shall win over you and perform well
You may have nice stories to tell

People around you may not believe
That so far you had only illusion to live
That you had mistrust for real man
And you tried to impose as super woman

You had never sought refuge
Else I would have never refused
You were real queen in my mind
I had to struggle so much to find

I have found treasure
With so much of mixed pleasure
That I see in you bright future
To shine in the world with fine culture

Can we not shed differences?
And take the union as by chances
You were denied real access
I am here as your real face

You can not reject now
As I am here to stay any how
To remove the misgivings
And behave as real king

You shall stand here as torn apart
Not bodily but my integral part
That you have taken decision to depart
From your stand and intended with fresh start

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

I have found you Simple and true

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Brian Jani 13 May 2014

Hasmukh This is a good piece of poetry

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good Ofuonyebi 'Dinobi 4 minutes ago good Comment +1 A woman has to realize that a man is there for her and she just needs to let him in.

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Kiara Moses4 minutes ago I think that it represents a great message. It has a lot of feelings that are included into the poem that you written. But the message was good. I liked it.

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nice Carre AliLess than a minute ago keep at it Comment +1 nice...

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JoshuaLess than a minute ago it was good...but I got nothing from it...sorry =( Comment 1 Comment+1 Hasmukh MehtaLess than a minute ago it was removal of misgivings from the mind of woman. who professed it as her win..

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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